English Final Exam
June 5, 2007Throughout the course of the year I have learned a lot of skills and ideas from the many things we did in and out of class. Some of the main things that we talked about this year in English were the themes and the subtext of a book, we also developed additional knowledge of the ESLR’s and what they mean. Other skills that we learned in English have also helped me do better in other subjects, which is an example of personal growth that we have had this year. These are the main things that I will be discussing in this essay.
This year in English I feel that I have learned and also strengthened some skills, which are vital for everyday schoolwork. One of the skills that I have improved quite a bit on this year has been being able to write longer and more descriptive pieces. At the start of the year we started doing reflective journals every quarter, the minimum amount of words for the essay was 1000, which at the start of the year to me seemed impossible to do. On the first reflective journal I was only able to write 950 words and it had seemed extremely difficult at that time to write so much. By the second quarter I was at least able to write 1000 words but it had taken me a long time to finish. I had also been having trouble explain in detail what we had done over the quarter. By third quarter I had been able to write a reflective journal that was 1250 words and I was also able to explain in detail and be more expressive with the ideas of what I had learnt that quarter. I think that the way I was able to improve in writing the reflective journal was because I took more time o be able to write something that was expressive and had a lot of detail and I also found it easier because as the saying goes “practice makes perfect.” Being more expressive and being able to develop ideas in a better way helped me a lot in other subject especially in Social Studies when we were doing essay questions in quizzes and tests. Another writing assignment in which I also had a bit of trouble at the start was poetry. At the start when we had started the poetry units my poems were pretty heartless and didn’t have much thought put into them. As we progressed through the quarter I was able to put more heart and thought into the poems to make them have a meaningful message or at least to make them seem interesting to read. I don’t think that I will be using much poetry outside of English but in what I call my “musical career” it might help me to be able to write song lyrics and also maybe just to be a more poetic person. I think I improved in writing poetry by trying to put a bit more of me into the poems than just writing them as if were any other assignment with no purpose except to get a grade for it.
This year I also felt I was able to become a better Effective Communicator. I think that all three classes that I had with Mr. Raisdana helped me be a better Effective Communicator. In English and Newspaper I learnt how to write different material for different audiences. I learnt how to use the writing pyramid for writing a book by drawing the reader in with small little details and setting he plot up so that it would latter reach a climax. I also learnt how to use the inverted pyramid for news stories so that the important facts were all at the start so that the reader would be attracted by the important information and then latter on in the story have the little details. This helped me become a more expressive writer and to know what structure to use when writing for different audiences. In drama we did poses in which we had to act out a different emotion, which was another way of being an Effective Communicator by being able to express yourself without words. We also had short five-minute scenes that we wrote and had to act out with a partner. This helped us to be a more efficient Effective Communicator by expressing ourselves using actions and words. I think that the biggest growth in the ESLR’s I have made this year was in being an Effective Communicator.
The last thing that I will talk about will be about the theme of “the effects of fear on an individual.” Fear is one of the most powerful manipulation tools that man has used. Fear can manipulate someone into doing practically anything that a normal person wouldn’t do in that situation. In “Lord of The Flies” for example, Jack used fear to turn the boys against Ralph, Simon, and Piggy. Jack told the other kids that he would keep the beast away from them and keep them safe if the had him as a leader. In WWII Hitler did the same thing; he told the people of Germany that he would make Germany a better place if they were to get rid of all the Jews. People actually believed him and went on to be part of the Holocaust, which is seen as one of the most atrocious genocides that has happened in recent history. I think that if someone were to say another group of people was to blame for the downfall of a country many people would still believe that what that person was saying was true. Genocides still happen around the world because people are being manipulated by fear or tricked into believing that they are better than others.
All in all I think that we have talked about a lot of meaningful subjects and ideas this year and that we have also learnt and developed a lot of skills. This year I have improved my writing a lot, which will help me a lot in the rest of the classes that I will have next year. I have also learned how to communicate myself in a better way using writing, speech and actions. We also have touched on a lot of very deep and meaningful ideas that I will carry out pondering on for the rest of my life. In the end I think the this year I have improved in many skills and I will keep improving on these skills and pondering on the thoughts and ideas I have taken from this class till maybe even the day I die.
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